this is interesting, i liked it.

an amazing work, i love your stuff! sorry i haven't reviewed forever... i used to be anime freakizoid. will this continue?
-draculas soprano X^_^X

Wow, this is really good. I just luv the modern twist to a old fairy tale;)

Morbid, I love it. Reality to it's fullest.

this was amazing. the reference to ash made me think of vampires and it just blew me away. this is a perfect mix of angst and fantasy in the purest or most well put way, I love the ending as it just dazzled with a fairy tale feel to it. I am so surprised this has not recevieved more reviews. really its a beautiful piece. I have no complaints toward your writing, nothing seems at all wrong with it. wonderful!

~* noelle

Wow, it was really good. Especially with the referances of ash and shattered glass and the bell strickng midnight. It really spoke to the reader. Good Work!

wow, thats pretty deep and depressing. this is wonderful angst, the images are so vivid and painful they really capture the aungish, disappointment and hurt she goes through. Love the metaphor too- its a great way to describe things.