i preactically love this!! why didnt you make the next one?

haha! this is funny! XD "an idea dawned on me. (An amazing feat in and of it self.)" ahahha XD that's kind of like me :P the conversations are so real! nice job writing this. and btw, they have good fashion sense. *erhm* --you do.
-vesta =]

cute :3 lol. i LOVE evanescence, i love anime (...well...only several addicting ones :D), i love green day, and blah blah blah. good taste in music
-vesta =]

good chapter. really well described =)

Please update again soon!

Hi. This is Ashlyn... UPDATE ASAP! I

yarr~ aye me matey!! tis a good story telling!! **EVIL CACKLE** (notice i said cackle not laugh cuz i mena like the evil cackles that come from like witches and stuff) lmao im bored -.- i need one of your stories to read so im not bored... SO KEEP UPDATING ME MATEY!! arr~

lol...again...its awesome! i would buy David on Ebay lol..keep it up!

heh that was so fantstically funni *thumbs up*

I would like to see the chapter longer. I felt it ended before it should have. There was too much abruptness to the end of the chapter. That said, it was very amusing, especially when David picked Alex up and when she exacts her revenge. It might have been helpful to know why David was so determined to get her to come onto the bus. And, in light of Chuck's statement about the room, when David said that the bus was behind the hotel, he perhaps should have said something about a mix-up with the reservations, so it would make sense. And how did David get to City Place? He could have given her compliments one her cool car. ;) Maybe he should have asked to drive it and had Alex say, no way, I have heard about your driving! LOL More! More!

Sorry i'm more into the emo stuff.

but Another chapter!i love it!

it's really well written.

more please.

*mad glompage* I'm so buying a David on e-bay! Or...I would if I didn't already have one...anyway.

Excuse me, as I'm off to go make a "Forest Fan" t-shirt ^_^

*glomp*

hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, David and Pie got kicked in the balls! -slaps pie-

luv always and forever, until Pie changes his name to Slartibartfast,~tera

Okay so i'm not a big simple plan fan [at all] as you will be able to tell once i say this.

I thought seb was the bassist.so you're right about david having a better voice than seb or pierre cuz he does. He's the one i was talking about. the emo one lol.

he's also attractive [i love his style]

I like Seb's voice better than any of them!

and he's emo which is cool.