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| aeolyn 2005-05-31 ch 1, | Great start. Loved the line "Teenagers would either run off to fun in the sun or scorch their brains with SAT 2400" So very true ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Jindarle 2005-05-26 ch 1, | hahahahahha! That is so like our orchestra! Mr. F, and Shelley! Yehhehehe! :):):):):):):):)yeah, the story is great, but um... some of the words are used wrong. Anyway, keep up the good work! I wonder where this is going! Post Post Post, my dear! mucho love. |
| swaggering curses 2005-05-25 ch 1, | Lovely writing style. I liked the flashing neon sign, that was a nice touch. I hope you keep writing this one, it definitely has promise. Woo! =) |