I like how you went to sleep, and wokeup in a new world! It was cool,and I like it. Thanks for the review.

gosh. You have so many stories I want continued!! I Want more! I'm so greedy!

Interesting dream... I must say, I liked the end with the ever-morphing tear... but tears come from ducts and not lids, dear... simple mistake. Only slightly detracted from the beauty you convey with this piece. Very original... But it sounds a little generic with the dialogue... I guess we can't help that, practically everything is written in every standpoint. Beautiful job, please do continue to write these unique pieces.

Cool... I think. It was awesome!

Wonderful descriptions and beauful imagry. Maybe it would be better as a poem since it is mostly description, and not plot of characters.

And it was confuscious, buddha and lao-tse. Good job though

Hey! That was really good. I love those stories that are so suspenseful like this! (is suspenseful a word?!!) Well anyway, I gotta go! Keep writing!

~Lone Metal