are you still working on this? if so, you need to send me the rest or something, it was really good. I liked the imagery and the distinct ominous feel of it all. an excellent prologue.

love,
dark-hearted rose

Sweetness...but is it really home, Dun Dun Dun. I was a bit confused while reading it, cause it seemed a weird way to start, then i read back and saw that i skiped the word prolouge and it all made sence. Nice descriptions, very nice.