Overall I enjoyed it. There are a few rythm problems, as in the third line. The message is sweet, though I do believe a rhyme would have added to the mood. Not constant, but every here and there. Also, I find the lack of capitalization rather disconcerning. The grammar looks to have a few typos, as in line three again. Punctuation adds character to both the piece and the writer of the piece. The better the poem looks, the better author looks. The message is beautiful, though, and that is the most important.

That was beautiful.

Simply beautiful...I live your style, and it flows wonderfully.