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Reviews For: The Stranger Returns
Meghan 2005-05-30 . chapter 1
Of the four poems about the Stranger I like this one second best to 'Dies'. The rythm is nice and flows well through most of it. I especially liked "When down goes the head of praying life,Using the same old jagged knifeWith six inches cut on either sideTil evil had won,

And good had died--"Very well done. The only reason this one isn't my favorite of the four is because of the length. It feels like if you had cut it down a little bit it would have been easier to follow. Nice job!(It's probably just me but while reading this I had images of not just Satan but Bush and Darth Vader popping into my head... especially Darth Vader)
Jeide 2005-05-26 . chapter 1
Some words seemed forced, but that's alright as everyone does that now and then. Putting that aside, this is as nice a poem as your other works.
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