hmm...what a itchbay. i'd smack her...but then again...I'm tactless...yeah, I really feel you there. i'm always stuck with the brunt work of verything and it makes me mad >< so I feel ya.

I can so clearly hear your voice in my head as you go. :) The anger and indignation is definitely there. Nice finish, too. :)

This seems to be mostly a rant...you're basically stating facts. I think you could put in some imagery and figurative language and show instead of tell things, and this could be really good.Yours in writing,~pointythings~