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| Whoregasmic 2006-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseok so...loved this!i loved the pictures in my head.girls with gunsscreaming about lust and sexand ** and life.everything. everythinglike i said.amazing...like...amazed amazing.i really dont know what to say. |
| Kira of Hecale 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abusegorgeous. "decked out in latin and lace"--lovely. you've got the alliteration down pat. and oh have I been there--teenage girls are supposed to giggle and be coy and naive! well, sorry, it ain't always that way. you're on my favorites now. |
| tofujunky 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseIt's unfortunate you don't get paid for your beautiful concoctions. This was sinfully delectable. |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseastounding. absolutely brilliant. you've stolen my words, you have. i'm sorry this review isn't more in depth, but i'm afraid this is just simply too perfect to review. favorites list indeed. |
| APersonAndAHalf 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI had difficulting finding you because you changed your name, had to go through all my favorite authors, some of whom I don't even remember adding, but it was worth it. First stanza is my favorite, I love the question mark, but the whole poem is amazing. Like the rest of the stuff you write.~A. Person |
| Akhenaten 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseWOW. WOW. simply wow. this merits a MEEP! the highest form of speechless adoration... so amazingly beautiful. You put into words something that most people just think about in vague terms... I really liked "A Vixen with an opinion has the floor." freakin SWEET! |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abusethis flows together perfectly and has the best style. i love all the references and everything about it. again keep writing :D |
| do not resuscitate 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abusethis has to be one of your best. very smart and chaotic. and i love the rhyming. jesus, this is perfect. |
| WiltingBlackRose 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI freaking love it! |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseyou. are. amazing. I wish I was you. "a vixen with an opinion has the floor"- that made me think of "Holiday" by Green Day, just for that reason. but so many cultural references, so much intelligence. I repeat- I wish I had your head on my shoulders. don't take that in a creepy way. I just think your poetry is essential. by the way, lovely speech in your profile. weren't Jim Carrey and Kate Winslet great in that movie? |