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| E.C. Netherland 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was extremely good! I had a feeling Martha was the ghost, I just had that feeling. Lol, anyways i loved this. Great job! Jeremy: (winks suggestively) Do you provide nightly services, sweetheart? Regina: (dead serious again) I am married and my husband is a professional boxer. Jeremy: (smile disappears instantly) Oh really? Good for you. AHAHAHAHAH!! That was definitely my favorite part! |
| SkateForLife 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseHaha good play. I loved the ending. |
| paper.eskimo.boots 2006-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abusePoor, poor Jeremy. Did his friend know this would happen? Oh and, by the bye, even if it was labeled "14" it would still be level 13. :3 |
| Raomina 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI never read plays but this is definitely an interesting one. Short, but good. It is a little like those mystery stories by Agatha Christie where everything is explained right at the end. Is this your first time writing a play, coz if it is, then you should definitely continue writing more. |
| Jany 2005-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abusecool! you write good stories/plays... i liked it!! |
| Gouranga 2005-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuselol, awesome! |