 E.C. Netherland 2007-09-19 . chapter 1This was extremely good! I had a feeling Martha was the ghost, I just had that feeling. Lol, anyways i loved this. Great job!
Jeremy: (winks suggestively) Do you provide nightly services, sweetheart?
Regina: (dead serious again) I am married and my husband is a professional boxer.
Jeremy: (smile disappears instantly) Oh really? Good for you.
AHAHAHAHAH!! That was definitely my favorite part! |
 SkateForLife 2006-12-12 . chapter 1Haha good play. I loved the ending. |
 paper.eskimo.boots 2006-03-01 . chapter 1 Poor, poor Jeremy. Did his friend know this would happen? Oh and, by the bye, even if it was labeled "14" it would still be level 13. :3 |
 Raomina 2005-05-27 . chapter 1I never read plays but this is definitely an interesting one. Short, but good. It is a little like those mystery stories by Agatha Christie where everything is explained right at the end. Is this your first time writing a play, coz if it is, then you should definitely continue writing more. |
 Jany 2005-05-27 . chapter 1 cool! you write good stories/plays... i liked it!! |
 Gouranga 2005-05-26 . chapter 1 lol, awesome! |