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Reviews For: The Thirteenth Floor
E.C. Netherland 2007-09-19 . chapter 1
This was extremely good! I had a feeling Martha was the ghost, I just had that feeling. Lol, anyways i loved this. Great job!

Jeremy: (winks suggestively) Do you provide nightly services, sweetheart?

Regina: (dead serious again) I am married and my husband is a professional boxer.

Jeremy: (smile disappears instantly) Oh really? Good for you.

AHAHAHAHAH!! That was definitely my favorite part!
SkateForLife 2006-12-12 . chapter 1
Haha good play. I loved the ending.
paper.eskimo.boots 2006-03-01 . chapter 1
Poor, poor Jeremy. Did his friend know this would happen? Oh and, by the bye, even if it was labeled "14" it would still be level 13. :3
Raomina 2005-05-27 . chapter 1
I never read plays but this is definitely an interesting one. Short, but good. It is a little like those mystery stories by Agatha Christie where everything is explained right at the end. Is this your first time writing a play, coz if it is, then you should definitely continue writing more.
Jany 2005-05-27 . chapter 1
cool! you write good stories/plays... i liked it!!
Gouranga 2005-05-26 . chapter 1
lol, awesome!
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