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| ossining 2006-08-03 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. Though I think that the first four lines alone could stand as their own poem. You think? But as it is, awesome job, as usual. Great images, fantastic verb use... Overall a wonderful poem. Keep writing! :) |
| Kartoffel on Canvas 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusewoah i love this.the emotion in your work is beautifulyoure very talented |
| the naked civil servant 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS POEM. it's **... **... AMAZING... :| |
| wishing/dreaming/waiting 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abusewow... way to paint a picture! nicotine patches, eh? ...hmm, interesting... i really like this poem. nice job!! |
| in tesseraction 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseportrait of an american teen; sex, love, alcohol... tragic, wonderful. |
| addie pray 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love the imagery and the cut off way it ended. Sharp. So well done. |
| lackluster 2005-08-01 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, to say the least(!) it tells such a twisted tale and i love that. |
| tofujunky 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI may not review you much, but I still want to let you know that I consider you one of the best (if not the best) authors at this site. I don't know if that means much, but it is the highest compliment I can offer. Every time I click on any of your pieces, it stuns me how ** brilliant they are; and each one is amazing in it's own unique way. |
| h. elizabeth stai 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuse"in the laps of starry-eyed virgins" thats a great line.i had to read this a few times to get it, but i really like it.good job with this |
| The Proxy Ninja 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI just got a little curious-- and went to go read this poem! It's amazing. I'll read more of these poems tomorrow and give more adequate reviews. I just wanted to say that I was really blown away by this-- maybe it's my mood. Tomorrow! ONWARD! |
| my failure 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuselovely. i love the last lines. actually i love all of it.lol..:) |
| B. M. Reed 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseoh my...this is wonderful...i don't know where you got this idea but...wow. it's perfect. keep writing. |
| randomunknown 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuseoriginal, beautiful, wonderfully weird and one of the best things I've read in ages. |
| like a lover 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abusebeautifully melancholy. i love love loved it. |
| kalmia raphael 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abusesounds like a sudden dive into somebody's subconcious. love the starry eyed virgins fluttering like butterflies. |