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| Gemma 2006-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseBloody Brilliant Lou! x |
| BJ Worth 2005-11-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's hard when we can't know what really goes on. I like the beginning when you compare yourself to a newborn. A simple poem, but good. |
| Maris. S 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI raelly like this one. Reminds me of some things that happened not to long ago. |
| Waste of Space 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI love the use of the word maliciously. It really fits well into the context of the poem. |