Well, I can't say the plot is boring. It kinda reminds me of Kill Bill. (You really love Tarantino, don't you?)Anyway, I spotted a pretty blatant error: "This is they type of guy". You may want to fix that. Other than that, there isn't much else to say. I'll be following this, but I wonder when the plot's going to come back into the real world instead of assasination attempt after assasination attempt.Keep writing!Peace out!

I'm grouned once more, but i will have a script for an anime mini serious up asp. This script reminds me of kill bill a little. The diolouge was ok but not great. Imagine that you are the charecter talking. Some times saying the lines out loud will help you. Cause if you say them and it doesnt sound realistic, well you get what i mean. Great job. Update soon.

The part where Kim kills Judd puts a smile on my face. It's awesome, in a wierd type of way. I think I might like this a little more than Candy and Violence. The idea is very intriguing: the antagonist being the main character. Also, I grow curious of all of the history behind the characters. This definitely belongs on my favorites list.

Again I say that I'm not too big on script or play format stories...but, since it's you Yinny (hope ya don't mind the nickname) how could I refuse? All in all, I'd have to say that it was very well written and no, it doesn't remind me of 'Candy and Violence'. Similar execution perhaps, but exceedingly different in all the aspects that count. I will also say, Yinny, that you have the greatest talent in script/play writing. I do believe that someday you WILL sell one of your scripts and when that day comes, I'll definitely be standing in line to see it! You really have a wonderful eye for it and I wish you all the best! It has a good flow to it, but I did come across a few spelling and grammar errors. You should probably give this story the once over if you are serious about possibly developing and selling it in the near future. Oh yeah, good luck getting rid of your writer's block. I know how it feels to have it and wouldn't wish it upon anyone...especially you of all people! Well, I guess that's all I really have to say! Thanks for the reviews on 'Glimmers of Destiny: The Assassin of Fate', it really helped to make my day. And if you wanna talk to me, just send me an email...it's on my profile. Well, I'm gone...

Terryll Preston, still2twisted of FictionPress fame...