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| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-05-30 ch 1,   | That line says it all..."I only fear my love, what is to become of us after this dance..." love can be fragile when you're waiting to be loved back.Great job. |
| Tears Of The Black Dragones... 2005-05-30 ch 1, | Aw, love the rhyme scheme Amber, really nice poem. sweet and magical. *~Rae~* |
| simpleplan13 2005-05-29 ch 1, | awesome... and beautiful |
| Icthoid Matro Coselos 2005-05-26 ch 1, | (afterthought)how can mass be vague? well love is mass but it's so vaugue... and you describe it so well! good poem! |
| Writer-of-Night 2005-05-26 ch 1, | Very nice, wonderful. |
| nacay 2005-05-26 ch 1, | bravo! bravo!! a positively well written poem. keep writing! |
| Waste of Space 2005-05-26 ch 1, | This is really beautiful. |