Beautiful.

there go the aesthetics. damn, this is so so good.

this is absolutly beautifully written...i like how you space certain words. it's kind of like your 'signature' isn't it?(i noticed you do that in your other poems, too) that's what makes them special! :)

you take what almost seems unnatural/ deformed/ ugly and combine it with such beautiful words that it makes the reader wonder if they are looking at things the wrong way.

Saccharine sweet. Well done.

This is so beautiful as well! I don't want to be redundant with my reviews, but these are all SO GOOD. You are a fictionpress marvel. The idea behind this is so tender, so loving, so beautiful. I am in absolute love.

-salt.

beautiful

i adore the second stanza. this is tantalizing, sensual, provocative...perfect romance that doesn't make me gag.

beautiful, beautiful. really just well done and splendid.

!* noelle *!

This is very surreal... can't think of a better way to describe it! It is beautiful though, love the whole feel of it. Keep writing.