o...yup. i definetly like this 1...

No matter how loud i scream...

No one...

hears me...

uh, yeah...i sumtimes rant in poetry (4get that part...)

fantasbulous!

SP

*hugs Kage-san* NO DYING!I liked this peom in the fact that the lines were short, making it easier to read and comprehend. The rhyme scheme was constant, as well as the meaning... but still, don't die on me! *hugs*

Yoku dekimashita

~Nico

Wow, that was really good! The two-worded lines made for a good connection between the other verses! ~P'Dale Buddy out~