Awesome job. Very very very very good. I loved it.

P.S: You're welcome for your review. Thank you for the review that you gave me.

It is great except for the last three lines. (in my opinion of course) The breaking up of the sentences with punctuation kind of contradicted the "it has no end". I still like it alot though. It seems like a mirror... without an end

Near the end...*shudder*...chilling, absolutely chilling.

Well done.

~Magnus

I'm getting chills again. A very powerful and intense piece. You rule all.

very powerful piece... awesomely written

great depth and power! beautiful poem!

That is a really powerful piece. I really like how you used the parenthasies to change the voice.. well i don´t know if you meant it like that but it makes thoses lines whisper in my ears. Which is really neat. I like it alot. well done

Wow...that was good. I know how that feels. Good job, keep writing!

Great job on this, I love it!

beautiful, skies! as always beautifully put and really fantastic! ^_^

!~* noelle *~!