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| smile persephone 2005-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseAw, this poem is so lovely. I love the personification in it. Nicely done! |
| Arutha 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this one is ex to the quisite ;P Seriously though, this poem is amazing. I'm a hardcore fan of rhyme meets freeverse, haha; I do it some myself. You have a perfect combination of common vocabularly peppered with... I don't wanna say bigger... oh screw it, with bigger words and it just works perfectly. This poem flows like one of those crystal rivers straight out of a fantasy novel. English class can bring out the best in a person, eh? Haha, keep it up ;P |