I really liked this. I'd like to read the earlier chapters. I thought it was very well written for a 1st person POV, and one can really sympathize with the protagonist; he has a lot of heart. It also made me laugh, and in the best possible way. I think it's so hard to impart humour in writing and do it properly. You've got a great style and a good deal of polish.

This was such a fun installment. Marty was so sexy in his adorable way. That club was so cool too. I said too much in my earlier comments before you posted, I think. I feel like I'm repeating myself.

Ah, well. I enjoyed this immensely and I look forward to the next installment of this series. :D