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| Summer's Light 2006-02-13 ch 1,  | abuseHey nice story! |
| Atanvarne06 2005-12-20 ch 8, | abuseThat was a great story! |
| clair-a-net 2005-08-07 ch 8, | abuseim glad they had a happy ending and got together it makes everything perfect. |
| Miradel 2005-08-07 ch 8, | abusechapter 7 was well written... typos here and there... but i didn't like the ending... for the speed of the tempo the story died off too quickly... you need to tapper it more. |
| Myriadragon 2005-07-12 ch 3, | abuseWell, you know, we love the romace, but...the writing needs some work. And I'm still mildly distressed by the lack of plot... |
| Myriadragon 2005-07-12 ch 2, | abuseEh...the plot's moving a bit fast, and ut's a bit cliche. But i'm enjoing myself nevertheless. |
| Myriadragon 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseOoh...interesting. Can't wait to see what happens, and of course I love a good romance. Oh, this is Myriad from TWC ^_^ |
| Brianna 2005-07-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseUr an awesome writer... very creative. And i'm glad Ava went w/ Haylen at the end. |
| Brianna 2005-07-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseUr an awesome writer... very creative. And i'm glad Ava went w/ Haylen at the end. |
| Miradel 2005-07-08 ch 6, | abusewonderful... i'm glad you are continuing... once again one or two grammatical typos, but otherwise i commend you on a job well done. keep up the good work |
| Atanvarne06 2005-06-29 ch 5, | abusethat was so cool! I can't wait for more. |
| brianna 2005-06-28 ch 5, anon. | abusewow.. great story. i hope Ava ends up w/ haylen. he sounds much sexier. plz update soon! |
| Miradel 2005-06-23 ch 5, | abuseoo oo what happens next. once again a few typos, but otherwise you've got me hooked... |
| Miradel 2005-06-21 ch 4, | abuse*gasp* wut happens next? wut happens next! very good... a few typos here and there. but very well written, i didn't expect the story to go in that direction. please update soon |
| clair-a-net 2005-06-20 ch 4, | abusei cant believe you did that. i hope they get out ogf it some how. |