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| faking closure 2005-05-28 ch 1,   | Gosh, I really have to add you to my favorite authors list *adds* This is such a fantastic poem, I absolutely love your writing. its so beautiful. >>Naomi (hearts hearts hearts) |
| W3DNESDAY 2005-05-28 ch 1, | not a lot of people can pull off prose, but i love the smooth rythmn of your poem. the last line "why bother" has that juvenile tone..nice choice of words |
| This Modern Love 2005-05-26 ch 1, | i loved your poem. it had so much emotion. it was sad and rather depressing...but very good. keep writing! |
| poetic abortion 2005-05-26 ch 1, | very powerful, very beautiful and equally heartwrenching. the emotions are brought out and written well, very beautiful peice and in a way twisted when looked at in a different light, mostly toward the ending. !~* noelle *~! |