Written honestly and straight from the heart. I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this because I was there not too long ago. Thanks for writing this and sharing it. Love you. Twig COG

That was awesome. I so can relate to that at times. BTW, You have such a wonderful gift of writing.I enjoy reading many of your other poems too.Keep writing, it something so easy to relate to. Good job!

you write many things that i can relate to, this being one of them. as i was reading i applied it to my own life, and how i often feel, like i am lost in a hole without air and no one to help. great write!

it's very powerful and creates extremely vivid pictures. great use of repetition.