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Reviews For: the volatile manic depressive girl of my dreams

euphemismsforlukewarmtraged...
2005-07-02
ch 1,
abusebeautiful. i love how its so "train-of-thought"esque, but so well structured at the same time.

i love this-> "i guess i’m running out of good spine-tingling imagery to associate with you"

on faves :)
wordsworth in a garbage can
2005-05-28
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing. It was like- wow- Elliott Smith. That's what it reminded me of.but i guess that you don’t want to be saved...

i guess that you don’t want to be saved...

definitely not sub-par!
smile persephone
2005-05-27
ch 1,
abuseThe ending seems somewhat abrupt to me. This is very raw and satirical. You portrayed it well. I don't think that it's sub-par at all. It's lovely.
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