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| euphemismsforlukewarmtraged... 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. i love how its so "train-of-thought"esque, but so well structured at the same time. i love this-> "i guess i’m running out of good spine-tingling imagery to associate with you" on faves :) |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. It was like- wow- Elliott Smith. That's what it reminded me of.but i guess that you don’t want to be saved... i guess that you don’t want to be saved... definitely not sub-par! |
| smile persephone 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThe ending seems somewhat abrupt to me. This is very raw and satirical. You portrayed it well. I don't think that it's sub-par at all. It's lovely. |