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| Nova-Janna 2006-03-08 ch 1,   | A different format completely, and sad in a way that makes me think. Thanks for this one. |
| liz anya 2005-06-29 ch 1, | I laughed at first because I misread the second line and thought it said "will leave marks on your behind", but the poem was very deep and eloquent. Good job. |
| ByFireAndMoonlight 2005-05-29 ch 1, | This is really good, I think maybe that you should try to find a way to seperate it into stanza's, even though it's kind of hard to do with fictionpress. Try using a line or something like that. It will make it easier to read, other than that this was fantastic. Very well writen, keep it up. ^_^ |