Nice.I always say that at the beginning of a review, but that's beside the point.It was a bit confusing, but that is okay. It forces me to read a little slower, to understand it all beter. Now I get it.It lacks description. Where? Why?

And here's the thing that really bugs me about a lot of the stuff you write.. and I'm sorry, just being honest, but...

I don't think you should care what others think. The point of writing is NOT that other people like it... It's that you like writing it!

Who cares if anyone reviews... or if they don't! You should't care, just write! My English teacher said this;

Write to express, never to impress.

You should write for yourself- or maybe for someone you know.

But I'm telling you this, and I have told other people this, not just you, and it's my opinion, so it really doesn't matter, like it doesn't matter if I, or anyone else, likes it.

Don't try and write for the world. Write for yourself.

~j

I liked the ending on this one. I think the others is still my fav. though. They are more "normal" (I still can't think of another word than the other two. And now that I have an acount (stupid fic.press) I can review *g*

'Feigned sagacity'- nice word choice. I don't see sagacity or it's other forms used much- sagacious was a spelling word in the 5th grade, and I've loved it since. ^^;Forgive me. I'm rambling.THANK YOU! ::squees:: I liked the lightheartedness of the 'argument' at the end. Another really neat one shot from a brilliant mind. ^^ (yes, that's flattery- a higher form of bribery. And I don't lose anything in the pursuit of more... ^-^)