WOW.

In awe,

-Shadow

&you'rejustso

black wido and;

you look so lovely

through an empty

shot glass.

... the english language fails me. You're uh-mazing.

I shudder to think that the word cummingsesque would offend the author of this poem, but if it does, i'm wholeheartedly sorry: it is the greatest compliment i think i could give. gorgeousity and grotesqueness with a hazy-love cherry on top. mon dieu vous êtes absolument étonnant...

::face à la beauté::rm

Nice structure. And the ending is great.

i cannot take the word lovely out of vocabulary. it describes every piece that i've read thus far. i find the lines "your saliva tastes like back-wash from the bottom of a Coke bottle" are the best

I like the tone of this and the motif of intoxication. Lovely.

So, so incredibly wonderful.

'black widow l'

Talent, my dear.

so, yeah, the end definitely got to me. your title-making skills are TOO GOOD. i want to steal them.

dark, surprising, choppy, interesting. it's definitely unique. i really appreciate how concise it is because it preservd my boredom. kudos

i really like this one...i like how you acussingly call sacharrine a sugar substutite...this feels bitter, i love it (sorry about the horrid spelling...i'm half asleep)

Lovely imagery in this. Real and surreal, loved all the lines in this. Well done.

Probably one of my favorite pieces. I like this quite a bit. I enjoy the style of your pieces, holds its own uniqueness. Bravo to you. I think the metaphors and ironic tastes you leave in this piece is interesting. Very nice. Once again great.

Bah! Another beautiful piece! These are just hitting so close for me, your style (i love) and your words (i adore). Each poem I've read is just a new burst of creativity and idea with its own unique pattern, though still identifiable as yours. This is brilliant. More, please!

one of your bests awesome job

so beautiful. so utterly beautiful. from the beginning and I was so hooked into this, reeled into this surreality.