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| dOrKy-GuRl03 2007-10-28 ch 9,   | O that just gotta be intense..i loved it..i hope that you will post the next chapter soon...its been forever since you updated...i like it..i wonder what going to happens next...bye..bye... |
| jaygirl 2006-12-14 ch 9, | update please I can't wait!! This story is really good! |
| xo-pauli-ox 2006-09-16 ch 9, | wow! awesome! keep writing! =D |
| Crazy Wynona 2006-03-17 ch 9, | I really like your plot, You've managed to convey this cliched love triangle thing out quite nicely. Update! |
| Alabrith Ironflame 2006-01-11 ch 9, | Um..what point of WRITE MORE don't you understand? |
| Madee 2005-09-16 ch 9, | Nice fiction! I love all the characters!Most of all Aron, Mike and Sam. Marcus is very funny! Oh, I so wish Mike would end up with Jessie! It would be different and unexpected! But I do think it will be Jessie and Aaron; Mike and Sam. Oh, the part of Jessie being asigned to interview Aaron was too much of a cliche! Don´t take long to update please! Oh, I was listening Wherever You Go while reading and I thought that it really goes well with this story! If Aaron was in love with Jessie why didn´t he contact her? |
| Hydie 2005-08-31 ch 9, | *hides behind fingers* *peeks* I don't want to watch this... |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-08-26 ch 8, | Sweet story.♥ |
| Tenshistar 2005-08-24 ch 9, | oh, a fight! NOt really, but its kinda a wierd moment. The story is good. I love the characters. one little thing for a critisism. it's probably the typing and when you go fast, but sometimes words are left out or they aren't completed. I know that sounds horribly picky, but i just noticed these things and wanted to let you know if you didn't get while proof-reading. i hope you update soon because this story rocks! |
| TaurusGirl7 2005-08-22 ch 9, | uh oh.. doesn sound too good... WHY DOES SHE KEEP KISSING MIKE! update soon! |
| FireBad.TreePretty 2005-08-21 ch 9, | yay u updated! omg does he punch him or sumtin? update sooner this time:) |
| bluewaves64 2005-08-21 ch 9, | uh-oh... so the two guys meet:) Great chapter! What's gonna happen next? Update soon! |
| Cisca Ironflame 2005-08-20 ch 9, | YAY! You finally updated! I love this chapter! I am clueless though of what's going to happen to Jessie (I mean seriously no one can literally control their feelings). Even though I'm glad you updated it and I got to read it, I want you to update again and soon (I'm sorry, I'm getting to excited over this, lol). |
| Camisado 2005-08-19 ch 9, | Yikes, and the tension rises up a few notches lol. Anyways, great chappie, bad cliffie... but still, i really like this story. Hope you update soon! |
| katieee 2005-08-19 ch 9, | This is really good. Can't wait to read what happens! ♥Katie |