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JackieTheWarriorPrincess 2005-12-06 ch 2,	abusePure awesomeness as usual
xHannahx 2005-10-16 ch 2,	abusedont think i agree with this one either. its a bit OTT. nice though Han
HiddenFlame42 2005-10-16 ch 2,	abusewails You stopped it in the middle? How could you!! All good things in life do come to an end...but I don't like being reminded of it! :P Depost it before you break someone elses FP heart! sniff
HiddenFlame42 2005-10-16 ch 1,	abuseLike the style, and love the points you're making. I also like how you're bringing in all the singers and stuff. They do that in older books and stuff too, but I never have a clue who they're going on about! lol This really makes it realistic. Nice work and thanks for the review btw! :)
Naomi Schemer 2005-10-13 ch 2,	abuseGreat story, and I love the moral. It's horrible that that's how so many people (guys and girls) base what they do on what other people would think. Great story, and very well writte as well.
CW-nerd-12 2005-05-28 ch 2,	abuseHm, entering it in a writing contest, eh? contraversial topics like teen sex are good winners (just kind of depends on what you're entering in). I've got a few suggestions to make it better: first off, there's too much dialogue. I know, it's a fun thing to write and great for characterization and all, but it starts slowing down the action and getting in the way. It's a big problem for me in my writing, too. My CW teacher says dialogue shouldn't take up more than a third of the page. Secondly, the first and second parts seem kind of disconnected. You need to find a way to make a bridge between the slutty clothes and the condoms: one of the girl's boufriends or something likes it when one of the girls dresses slutty, and she's got the condom and being extermely submissive or something. Just a thought. But, anyway, this is a good start. Polish it some, and I'd say you had a good chance at winning something with this! Keep writin'!
yourevilsoul 2005-05-28 ch 2,	abuseI like it, very realistic!
bella natty 2005-05-28 ch 2,	abusecool! great chappie! hey, is this the end, or is it gonna end in June? I didn't understando ur A/N!
account not in use 2005-05-28 ch 2,	abuseYou should do a longer story dealing with this subject, I think it'd be great. I love the end. It's amazing- I don't obbsess over hot clothes and perfect har and make-uup, but sex and food...god...Wonderful piece of work here!
Yaquel Visain 2005-05-27 ch 1,	abuseInteresting anecdote! I agree... Dunno, I've never really had... a fashionable image to uphold to attract guys. Not that I'm conventionally beautiful by any means, or even have a nice body under my unfashionable/unsexy clothes.. Just... eh. Confidence without gallons of clevage is sexy, I guess. It's wonderful that you aren't being sucked into the mold of beauty yourself. Good write.
bella natty 2005-05-27 ch 1,	abusecool! is this like a one shot or r u gonna have more?
laydeegirl 2005-05-27 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is a good story...really emphasizes a good point
Ethereal Oceans 2005-05-27 ch 1,	abuseHmm... I like this. I really do. It's pretty realistic for a story and you've already brought personality into your characters. It sounds like a trip to the mall I would have with my friends only me being Ray. Update soon.
Selene-Capri Jordan 2005-05-27 ch 1,	abuseFinally! Someone who understands that life is not about impressing guys and the superficial aspect of life. I'm glad you didn't fall into the teenage hormone trap. Hopefully you can get your friends to see the light too. Love your style, keep writing.
account not in use 2005-05-27 ch 1,	abuseThat is my sister to a T. It's amazing, I'm happy in jeans that make me feel awesome and a slightly baggy shirt, while my friends need short skirts, tank tops, and everything. Depressing. Great little fic you have here!

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