heyboys are NOT crap okay?they make life so much more...colorful. lol

I really liked this poem! It reminds me of how I felt about a guy. I really like the part about when you get up from being hurt by a love, and are ready to be hurt again is when you have grown up.Keep Writing!

since ur so desperate for a review, im helping out. the flow was awkward, because i couldnt tell when it was rhyming and when it wasnt. i thought it repeated the same point for a lot of lines. but it was a strong poem, and it was influential. I know it could help a lot of girls out there going thru the same thing, and it was good of u to add that for them.

P.S. i love ur (or queen elizabeth I's) theory!

Poem...fine...not entirely mediocre...Opinion...not worth praise...Generalities...are not real...Shame upon you for stereotyping males...Look...think...Don't fall into the void

Great poem, I feel your pain.

Wow! This is a wake up call for me. I was chasing a boy that was a Senior. I guess it wasn't meant to be, but there's still more out there! Thanks for sharing.

I kinda dont like the flow of it but i really do think its good. later