very interesting and thought provoking

O very nice piece. I love how it actually makes you think when you read it. You can visually see the blocks in your own mind stacking. cool piece. bravo.

I like this, very good to describe a writer.

Your first and last lines were great (though line one should have another syllable), but the "tall" in L2 threw me off. Towers are always tall, and that adjective takes away from the minimalism of haiku. I understand you did it for the syllable count, but it wan't necessary. Maybe you can do something like:

Thoughts, thousand bricks builtInto a tower (add two syllables somewhere into this line)A world within worlds.

That way L1 will be correct and you can choose better description for L2.

Otherwise, good poem. I really like the last line. It's perfect.

Hope this helped,Oksana

the first line isn't 7 syllables. nice concept though.

i like this one. i like the concept and the imagery.haikus rock, no?