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| A Lone Howl 2006-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful. I loved it. |
| AethraZip 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseIf I didn't consistently tell you already, I would say that this poem is ** amazing and so are you. But I tell you that every time you write a poem and you haven't believed yet, so I won't say so now. Anyway, the repetition.. or whatever Krusty calls it.. that thingie where lines repeat but change some words, remember? is really effective. Makes the poem, I think. Nice job. |
| Kikaria 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI love this! so sad... i especially like the second stanza and the last two lines. i think that the last lines of a poem are always the most important, and you do a good job of making them have a real impact.~ZhAaN |
| weepingsilver 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseupdate feind! i love you poetry what sparked this? luv ya ws |