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Reviews For: That Never Will

A Lone Howl
2006-07-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful. I loved it.
AethraZip
2005-09-30
ch 1,
abuseIf I didn't consistently tell you already, I would say that this poem is ** amazing and so are you. But I tell you that every time you write a poem and you haven't believed yet, so I won't say so now.

Anyway, the repetition.. or whatever Krusty calls it.. that thingie where lines repeat but change some words, remember? is really effective. Makes the poem, I think. Nice job.
Kikaria
2005-05-30
ch 1,
abuseI love this! so sad... i especially like the second stanza and the last two lines. i think that the last lines of a poem are always the most important, and you do a good job of making them have a real impact.~ZhAaN
weepingsilver
2005-05-27
ch 1,
abuseupdate feind! i love you poetry what sparked this?

luv ya

ws
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