I didn't quite get "blue-eyed fantasies stalk my dreams"...but the language is "X-quisite" as always. Loved the line, "glass slipper for another soul." Excruciating. ^_^

good. i really love the last two lines, they were a great way to end the poem. the only thing that may make this better is to add more story to it. the poems has great imagery and description and all that, but it doesnt seem to be as connected to a story as it could be. thats the only thing that i think could make it better. good job.