This makes a sensable lack of sense to me (if that makes any sense at all), possibly due to the fact that I still have yet to get any sleep since writing FRLH. Still, in my half-trance state this is quite clear to me, and will echo in my mind for some time to come. I can't tell you anything specific that I like about it because I like the whole thing. good work!

I ** hate Lovecraft (such a angsty fellow) but I did enjoy this poem. Especially dug the last stanza. Much like Lovecraft (and morbid poetry in general), this is a tad overwritten. And any poem about Lovecraft MUST have something about neo-paganism. It's pretty much essential. :P

good. for me the meaning got a little muddled, but thats probably just me. i loved the first and second stanza and after that i started to lose the meaning. one line tho i think wasnt very good "Even Erich Zann would be dismayed" i think it takes away from that stanza. otherwise it is a really good poem. good luck in the contest!

*claps* That was an amazing poem. I bet you'll do absolutely awesome in the poetry contest.-broken h3arts