As someone else said, some typos, but a very nice poem, and very sad!

Our hearts goe out to you. *double hearts go crawling up to pippin, purring* err...not exactly what we meant...

-from the desk of Mr. Wink and Mr. Fibb

A few typos, but overall a nice poem.

I hear ya! I feel your pain, young padowan, bwaha. *cough* Anywho, I 'll look at your other poem now, heehee

aw...that's so sad, but I think it's written beautifully! I hope you find a way to get over him somehow, I'm sorry that I don't have any advice for you. Anyhow, Keep it up!