I like this one i could really get a good image.

much, much better. Change the second stanza, third line. the "paths" is to repetitive. Treading over the "road", maybe? Other than that, I'm satisfied. -ADD

i think its awesome & very true.. great job

much better. more soul in this piece then the other one but both are displayed well. I am amazed by the power of this and the touching note in this. again, wonderful work and never stop writing!

!~* noelle *~!