Thank you very much for your reviews on my writing. I had to employ acupuncture techniques to extricate my overly inflated head from the ceiling after reading them. I’m intrigued by this story so far. I really like the way you’ve set it up. It’s such a perfect picture of an idealistic family; it seems almost too perfect, as if something is going to fall out of place soon. You can feel that tension. Keep writing.

I take it you must be a mother or you would not be able to write about a mother and young daughter relationship so well. If you are not, then you are really great at empathizing with others, watching how they act and react, etc. you know the roles so well. I found no mistakes in this one. I'm curious to see where this story leads.

Well, thanks for being my first review and I am one of those authors who gives a review when I get one. I have to say that you're a really great writer. I loved the family setting. I loved the way you worded everything and the way it flowed. You sound like a seasoned writer. I only found three mistakes in the whole chapter, which is really good. I guess I'm so used to fanfiction.net that when I started here at fictionpress.net I expected the writers to be at about the same level, but I was wrong. Don't get me wrong, there are some great writers on fanfiction.net, but if your writing capabilities are a reflection of fictionpress.net as a whole, then I think I'll enjoy my time on this site. Yeah, I went back and read my chapter, and there were more than two mistakes. I counted about seven. I really ought to proofread before I send. Anyway, if you wanted to know the three errors in your story, you made the same error twice (it's grammatical). Her and Eric were young. It should be she. Same error again: Eric and her belonged together. Also should be she.The third error was a simple typo--one of those things that everyone does. You forgot to put a space between they and failed. Don't think that I'm picking at your work by pointing them out. It's just easier to find when you know exactly what you're looking for. Over all, good job. I only wish I could write as well as you.

Aww and I forgot to add thanks for your email. Read more of my poems if you have time. I would love your reviews!

So I am here to review this story. To begin with I find it quite interesting. Update soon =)

Thanks for the email. I love getting emails... I don't know why I just do, especailly from ficpress people. Anyway, you were right, I do like this story. Update soon okay? Brillent job on it. Thanks as well for all of your reveiws!

I like this story, awesome work!!

Impatient (looks around) I'm not impatient...ok, a little. But you're a good writer. I wish I could write like that. I love this chapter, it's adorable. I hope you continue, but no rush. Do it whenever you have time. I'll still read it.

Yes yes, this is good,Kijo-Emiko

Why, you're welcome! XD Lol, I already told you what I thought about this chapter in school, but you might have forgotten so here I go.

It is really cute (a.k.a: the ooshy gooshy mushiness is fine on my scale) and Cassidy reminds me off a puppy. The desciptions are great too, but some of the sentences are short and you can combine two short sentences with commas. Yep!

*cackles* You know... if you had just let me borrow the notebook I could have typed out the rest of the chappie, but I guess you wanted to write more, ey?