I really like this but I'm confused as to whether or not you will continue. I hope so. The description of the forest painted a rather vivid picture in my mind and you tapped into my emotions as I felt sorry for the lonely life she is destined to read. Liked the end as the mother echoed the lines from the dream and it has me thinking that maybe it wasn't a dream at all. What is going to happen to James? Are you planning to update? Please add chapter two and help answer these questions. Very cool, nicely written and promising opening. Luv Kaitx