wow... morbid, demonic, and so many other words that i love to say about a poem like this. most people would tell you to get help or get happy but i say... YEY another morbid, demonic, and so many others peom! YEY! anyways i really liked this. deep in so may ways... write on...

dark and powerful - very good. keep writing.

Powerful, and the imagery is fine work. It makes me think of dungeons, ditiness, grime, and pain. love, and hate. the end of the world.

Cool ending; very dark, but that's how I like it. :)

violently viciously powerful. Awesome poem.

sexy poem!

Reminisent of Atreyu's newest album. Nicely construsted.

~Magnus

*blinks*

Well that certainly took me by suprise! Not that it was an unwanted emotion, not in the slightest.

*shakes head* I've tried to find the right words to describe my feelings about this for the past couple of minutes. Sadly, there hasn't been much progress.

So I resort to my usual "It was well written, enjoyable to read, and interesting, so what isn't there to like?" And sincerly hope I don't invoke your wrath.

-exile

I really liked that. Sort of in the opposite direction of my poem Servant. Very powerful. Keep on writing.

Damn. That was...powerful. Lately I've been trying to write sadistic poetry like this, but its...not working...I love this, it's just aboutwhat I wish I could write. Good job, keep writing!

um.. well done. this is very descriptive and I get the feeling that is has like two perspectives. INteresting

very creepy picture of love... powerful poem

I love this, great work!!

powerful and vivid. awesome poem!