Well written ..i like the metaphores. FaCINating, no i don't think i remember you. but your poetry is quite lovely. i bow to you, another respected scholar in this madened world, with only poetry to speak. wow that sounded cool. WRITE ON! (

liked it. very dramatic. and you're right depressing...actually dark would be a better adj. . you should read my poem "Memoirs of a Masochist". it's right up your alley and probably my best poem. you have a lot of poems but maybe i can tackle a majority.

I love this, you are going on my favorite authors list, awesome work!

Short, but really good. I seriously don't think you've written anything I don't like yet.

I like the stucture and formatting of this poem, and your use of repetition at the end. Very good!