Reviews for Wish Come True - FictionPress.com

till-the-end 2005-05-29 ch 1,	abuseCutiee!! Aw. P.Z. Ben is sexy! lol cute poem krys! Except you forgot to add in the part where you love me dearly! and I won! lmao! Cute!~till-the-end~
arachibutyrophobia 2005-05-28 ch 1,	abusevery sweet ^^hopefully, there'll be a poem about the next time you see him around lol
TrueToMyself 2005-05-28 ch 1,	abuseHey! I like this poem and its conversational feel. It seems to run-on a bit though, with all of the commas. Some places do not even need punctuation (i.e. "It's would be like/Dangling food in front of a starving person" Also regarding those lines, I think you meant "it" instead of "it's"). The story in it is amazingly touching, though! ^_^ You are so lucky that something like this happened to you. The poem is so suspenseful! Where's the next chapter? =P Keep up the great work, TTM P.S. Did you know that you are not accepting anonymous reviews? If you did not know, you can change it under set up.