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Reviews For: Minor Incident

emundee
2005-07-08
ch 1,
I rolled my car a few weeks ago, and your poem hit me particularly hard in the stomach. The last two lines of the first stanza stood out, because I remember so vividly how painstakingly slowly yet inevitably my car turned over.

excellent imagery.
Relayer
2005-05-29
ch 1,
Whoah... hard hitting descriptions, paints a full of picture of the situation. And the slightly humourus "blimey." Excellent.
xHannahx
2005-05-28
ch 1,
i like this, it kinda flicks up at the end from the built-up tension. and yes, the summary could soo be taken the wrong way...

Han
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