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| emundee 2005-07-08 ch 1, | I rolled my car a few weeks ago, and your poem hit me particularly hard in the stomach. The last two lines of the first stanza stood out, because I remember so vividly how painstakingly slowly yet inevitably my car turned over. excellent imagery. |
| Relayer 2005-05-29 ch 1, | Whoah... hard hitting descriptions, paints a full of picture of the situation. And the slightly humourus "blimey." Excellent. |
| xHannahx 2005-05-28 ch 1, | i like this, it kinda flicks up at the end from the built-up tension. and yes, the summary could soo be taken the wrong way... Han |