Cool, it starts out sad but ends in sweet. It's like one of those situtation which you think is bad but turns out to be good. Like breaking your arm in gym and meeting the new hot nurse TA. Haha. I wonder which story this is...Element Guardian-chapter 5 is up.

Ok I am probably being dense but I wanted to know who them were. This started out really depressing but towards the end brightened and seemed to bloom with newfound hope and stength. So I loved the questions and shifting of two utterly different tones. Luv Kaitx

Really dreamy.. I liked the voice/tone of it!

lav

wow, this is a good poem, i like the way you ended it, it was dark at first but towards the end the hopefulness was obvious. good job

This is a damn good poem. Rather long lol but still very good i thought...my mind always works like this. Just keeps continuing. Good start i think it is great ^^