Aww, I feel so sad for Anna..I actually can relate though..It's written so realistically..

Hey, PerfectlyImperfect here with another lame/unoriginal penname…here to review…

This story is really good so far, it seems a lot like one big diary entry. Which is a good thing. I like the realistic setting, realistic dialog, realistic emotions (Doodle voodoo? I’ve…NEVER done that…*shifty eyes*)…I love it. Continue as soon as you can, por favor?

~…uh…me

Ho. Ly. Crap. I never thought a story I read could sound... so much like me! Change the names and it's my story. -.- Depressing.

But your writing is good. =D And I might take Jeremy's advice, whether Anna does or not. xD

Yeah... There's my little rant of the hour... Onto to actual review.

Your writing is really good! REALLY good! =D Flattery not intended. But, anyways, update when you get the chance please.

This is making me think of my bestfriend and me. LOVE IT.

This is an awesome story, great work!

i realy liked it

That was an amazing chapter! Full of raw emotion, humor, and very interesting too. I actually felt sorry for poor Anna. And you're right, who wouldn't? It was a great chapter. Keep up the good work!

i don't know what it was, but that last part, where Anna talked to Theo...that really struck home-i like that--it was heartbreaking-but it was really good-wow...i'm having a moment, hold on...

that was a good chapter, definitely--one thing i had a slight problem with was the fact that Anna all of a sudden felt like she was being compared to Bethany--maybe I was a bit overwhelmed with it, but it's an important issue to bring up so i'm glad you did it early--like i said before the Anna-Theo convo was pure genius, and I think you have a lot of good things developing! personally, i hope that if Anna doesn't end up with Theo, that she will be able to overcome some of her more inner problems, if that make sense--so now i'm rambling, so please keep writing!

I had always fallen into this kind of problem, the problem where I really liked a certain guy, and I was always too certain that he liked me back, but then realized it was all in my head and he actually liked another girl that was always prettier than I or more talented than I.

HOLY CRAP. That's practically the story of my life.

Anyways, this story sounds awesome so far.

=o Meep!

Sounds like Julianne is an 'A' and Anna is a 'Z'. Uh... I mean, Julianne is optimistic and Anna is pessimistic. Don't ask, it's a long story.

I like this story. It's cool. ^.^

Seemed very cheesy.Ew.Mushy gushy... bleah.Good writing though, just needed a better topic.

I think it's sweet. Lovely job.

Dude, I relate. Well, that's how my life used to be before I gave up on liking any guys I actually know.

I'm actually liking this a lot, even though, like I said in my e-mail if you've read it yet, I don't care to much for made up characters. But this seems good, so I'm going to keep reading! n,n

Good grammar, good plot so far. Keep going!

~PerfectlyImperfect

P.S. That copyright thing at the bottom is damn nifty enough to almost make me wanna get my own panname here...gah, maybe I will if I get some ideas. I'm kind of...in a rut right now. *grr*

SQUE! Uh, yeah... This is me, Raven8516/tayk. Uhh... I changed meh name on the spur of the moment. Don't ask, and remind me to change it back sometime...

Now that that's out of the way, I love love love LOVE this story! I feel like that about one guy I know (And like. xD Not a word...), except that he's not dating anyone. And we're not sophmores.And the names are different. ^.^ Anyways. The plot seems really great, the characters are perfectly developed. And for once, I'm NOT just saying that! See those three little click boxes at the bottom, before the 'submit review'? -clicks 'em all-

Hey! Thanks for the reviews and for contacting me. Your story is very good, but I would like to know what else happens in the story. As for my second chapter, I will revise it and you can see if it's better or needs changing. Thanks!