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| C. X. Blackfeather 2005-06-22 ch 1, | I like the imagery and the contrasts here. Typically, when the subject opens up in a poem/song they show their true lovable selves to a heartbreaker target audience. This is better. I'm wondering what this would sound like put to music. |
| ShadoWings 2005-06-06 ch 1, | I'll try not to review every single one of your works, but this one is pretty cool. Well done with the rhyming in this one, too. |