aw i loved reading this. it was nice and short..although i wish it was longer and more detailed, i feel lyk i didn't get enough of fiona and james! I liked james the most.. he seems real. He's not some powerful duke who beds different women every night (that's just cliche) and he wasn't unnecessarily mean to fiona.. which is good because i'd fall for a considerate guy over a jerk anyday! and i loved fiona, she's smart! =) thanks for a great read, keep writing!

simple and sweet. love it

Great story! I love it! :)

I love this story!
xx

omg. i loved that.
she won and he kissed her :P

i like :D

Okay. I know I'm reviewing again. Hi. You probably think that I'm nuts reviewing at the beginning of a story instead of at the end, but hey, that's just my style. I liked, no, loved your story. My dear, you have a passion for words that twist and twine and spin out a story more delicate than a gossamer strand of a spider's web. It is truly art if you have written it. I hail you as an amazing writer and wish you great success. I look forward to your other stories as well. For now, however, I must say adieu.
Lots of Love,
Emi

amazing story , by the way you are a great writer! i enjoyed your story very much!

hallos! this story roxs again!! hv read all ur stories n they r great..hahas..

Yay! I love a happy ending! I enjoyed this from start to finish!

i love it. i think this is my favorite aside from the waiting room by BKGal-24. her story is really good by the way. she got it done a while back. cause i remember reading through the whole thing. but right now she's on editing it and everything so you'll have to wait a while before you actually get to read the whole thing. but it's a really good plot and story. i like her work. yours is really good though! i love the ending the best!

ouch. it hurts to be told that your poor. seriously she needs to be more considerate of people's feelings.

Fiona is kind of spoilt
I hate ppl who are like that

Gud story tho =)

shes wierd

EXCELLENT.