what awesome imagery! i am in love with this. great job.

I love how you inverted the () for the word inverted. It's the minor details like that that I truly appreciate.

What rich combinations of words that enchant and delight.

!so many powerful peculiar picturesque words. what a vision to remember. her.

beautiful. I can't get over how good you are at this

wow i love the flow. everything about it is amazing. if i had room in my favorite list of writers you'd definatly be in there. i'll see if i can make any room. anyway keep writing :D

there is something so fantastical and dreamy about your writing. like some woozy music video...i love it.

this is really awesome...i'm putting you on my fav authors list! (argh...if i could put extra exclaimation marks i would...)

love the format- kind of like everything running together for her- visual imagery i suppose. love the last lines, imagery is hauntingly beautiful.

This was fantastic, I love it. Bright imagery and bloody hell, good wording.

the metaphors and non-conventional imagery used in this is fantastic. Interesting format as well.

oh wow. This is incredibly beautiful. Your words have such a beautiful flow & quality to them; it reminds me of something I might write. I love the formatting on this one except that the second parenthese on inverted went to the next line :\ (hah, that just kind of caught my eye). But this is so so so well-written and thought-provoking. I love everything about it. Keep it up!

-salt.

haunting and breathtaking peice of poetry. really well written and dizzyingly perfect, really. the format is amazing and fits the whole thing so perfectly!

!* noelle *!

Very haunting.. so many visuals in such a small piece of writing. I adore this greatly.

dizzying... nice.