   Aleksy The Flying Onion 2007-09-29 . chapter 1That is one spiffy poem. So simple and direct. It brought a smile to my face too. Very nice! |
 pneumothorax 2005-06-07 . chapter 1'StripesThem'
at the end was curious. Interesting poem. |
 Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-28 . chapter 1oh i love the style of this one. it flows with originality and is refreshing to read. keep writing :D |
 Seize Every Moment 2005-05-28 . chapter 1 Good, good. I like how you did this, it was very creative! Keep it up! |
 kaylajac 2005-05-28 . chapter 1Unusual. But good. |
 WarningAtomicMilkshakeInUse 2005-05-28 . chapter 1I love this! So cool. I don't know why it appeals to me. It is original, a fresh idea, I think. It is very good.Not too much detail, as you find in some love poems. Simple and to the point. Very nice. |
 GC Age 2005-05-28 . chapter 1Weird is all I have to say. A good kind of wierd. |
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