 MelGrl 2007-07-24 . chapter 2This is really interesting so far. I am looking foward to the later chapters, so please update soon. |
 jj 2006-03-29 . chapter 2 Just keep WRITING just keep WRITINGhaha luved the storyi want more more more |
 BITT3RSW33T 2005-09-12 . chapter 2good beginning, keep writing |
 ChocolateSugar 2005-06-21 . chapter 2I love this story so much and as of right now i think that all of them are idiots except for Kel!! |
 serrinaus 2005-06-15 . chapter 2that was an awesome chap! keep up the good work |
 indigoblue 2005-06-05 . chapter 2 this story wouldn't happen to be based on a true story would! it is that u...i..m..p..y *cough |
 kamma7292 2005-06-04 . chapter 2Great chapter! |
 ChocolateSugar 2005-06-02 . chapter 1It's funny and I love Yuri's personality! She connects to me cause I'm a lot like her. I would probably hate the Madison type too or at least envy her. I think the concept of this whole middle school mansion thing is very orginal because a) i havent seen it on fictionpress. b) most ppl wouldnt do middle schoolers. c) u seem to have a lot of the different stereotypes that actually are people in real middle schools. ex. madison: blonde, perky, wavy hair, beautiful. leonard: boy who loves to listen to music. im in 7th grade so, im wondering if this will be anything like the people in my grade are. so please keep writing! |
 serrinaus 2005-06-02 . chapter 1well this is very interesting |
 horselover2356 2005-05-28 . chapter 1hey! its a great start! *hugs* |