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| Calliope Foster 2005-12-27 ch 1,   | Awesome poem. I absolutely love the name, it's so poetic in itself, and to add to that you have a 'flawless' poem that has such emotion packed into a rather 'small'--what some may consider small--poem. Beautiful! |
| Illastic 2005-05-28 ch 1, | Wowee. You put these things in -- painfully honest words. I love this. "Their mistake became pride,Hers became shame." My favorite lines. = ) |