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| Spiral Artist 2005-07-18 ch 1, | Dark with a capital "D" upon it... As Lucretia said, it can make a very good metal song; but I imagine it as a melodic death metal song better. Nevertheless, quite an amazing piece. |
| Arsenic336 2005-06-14 ch 1, | Ooh, darkness. That's how I like it. Anways, it was beautiful in a dark sort of way. Bravo to you! |
| Spleeny 2005-05-30 ch 1, | This is among your best work ever. I can see it as a really great metal song. I have a tune in my head...Wow, I love this. |
| Annarence Studio 2005-05-29 ch 1, | A decent poem, but what's up with the brackets? They make it seems more like a song instead! |